No, I am not going to add in my two-cents about the topic. But, if you are looking for a few critiques of the video…
Does Jesus Hate Religion? Kinda, Sorta, Not Really by Kevin DeYoung
The Problem Isn’t Religion by Justin Boulmay
and Jesus v. Religion? by Joe Heschmeyer (Justin linked to this article and I found it helpful).
ἐνθύμησις 
I thought about posting a few comments on Facebook when I saw this video. Obviously, he is utilizing “religion” in very particular way. Since it is poetry, I decided that he had the liberty to use the word in that way. So I did not to comment on the video. I think Mary Beth said it best: “I think he over simplified the definition of religion (which is very common now) but I found this beautiful and the concepts dead on.” If anything, he is contrasting cultural perception of Christianity with true Christianity. Gotta love the creativity.